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Vampires Bite

Vampires Bite

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TeeAnne By MrsGboys4ever Updated Dec 01, 2016

"You were with him again?" he sneered grabbing me by my waist. 
  "I was only trying to..." His eyes became dark and filled with lust as he grabbed my hair gently tilting my neck back. My heart was beating fast. Was he going to kill me now?He traced a finger lightly down the side of my neck sending goosebumps down my body just as his teeth sunk into me.
  Cassie has finally landed the job of her dreams in a prestigious law firm when he walks in. Things begin to really look up when she lands the biggest contract the firm has ever had..Auxillio.
  Auxillio is run by the town's most eligible bachelor, and town playboy Antonio Morros. Except Cassie is the only one who knows his secret, which could prove dangerous.
  Can Cassie keep from succumbing to Antonio's charm or will she find herself another notch on his centuries old belt?

- - Jul 14, 2016
 #tp book club
                              Interesting way to start! I really like how you ended. I enshrined it in a creepy voice though. Haha. Keep it up :)
rock_dreamer rock_dreamer Jul 23, 2016
                              Definitely an interesting way to begin a chapter! Already builds up suspension and curious to see what happens next! Good job! ^^
SpaceAdventurer_11 SpaceAdventurer_11 Jul 20, 2016
 #TPbookclub my first time reading a vampire book so I don't really know what to expect but so far it's very interesting ☺ I shall read on
MinnieJaide MinnieJaide Jul 05, 2016
Quite the intriguing start, well amount of mystery to wonder what the heck is going on. lol. Punctuation wise, nothing major but in a few spots you used apostrophe's when I'm sure you meant to use quotation marks when speaking. Other than that, looks good. =]
SoupsDWord SoupsDWord Jul 20, 2016
                              Woah! Doner? That's a word I have not read in vampire books before, and this sneak peek was very interesting. I can honestly say that I am intrigued. You have also portrayed a sense of ominous-ness very well. :)
AmandaHolloway8 AmandaHolloway8 Jul 01, 2016
                              Nice, sounds like a good story. I like the ending sentence of this introduction. Its kind of creepy.