poetry

poetry

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jake By JakeWalterCampbell Updated May 06, 2011

a collection of  poems written to show my honest perspective on important facts about life, some might seem a bit vulgar or raw but i think it is an important part of my style. 
Please leave your comments either positive or negative all opinions are appreciated.
I hope you enjoy

WhiteCorvus WhiteCorvus Nov 23, 2015
Wow. Deep and great vocabulary. That was a excellent falling in love poem.
Dream_Girl Dream_Girl Mar 16, 2011
@JakeWalterCampbell no problem Jack-O :P its your talent that draws us to your poems:):)
JakeWalterCampbell JakeWalterCampbell Mar 16, 2011
@Smileys @MeganRochelle @Charleydonnataylor@yankarl0 @Gingerpie @gabbyalex @Dream_Girl @Lynfalling @JanuaryHarper  thanks heaps hey guys i appreciate your feed back, i still remember the night i wrote this :) 
Charleydonnataylor Charleydonnataylor Jan 09, 2011
Love it, i read it as a song tho but thats not a bad thing   
gabbyalex gabbyalex Dec 10, 2010
awwwww, that was like an emotional rollercoaster. .  during the beginning i was like "i wonder y he's feeling this way" but the last verse told me everything. Like, a sweet suprise. like it alot.
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Lynfalling Lynfalling Dec 10, 2010
very good, bellow should be below, and where should be were. But, a beautiful poem that gets everything you were trying to portray to the reader :)