Unfashionably Dead

Unfashionably Dead

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SomewhatDistracted By SomewhatDistracted Updated Nov 16

Fashionista Cheline Morgan's life is turned upside down following the discovery of a corpse outside the building where her best friend lives. After coming to terms with the death, Cheline attempts to solve the mysterious circumstances surrounding it, while her best friend appears more guilty by the minute. Will she find the murderer before her BFF ends up in jail or worse...dead? 



Cover by the incredibly talented @x_Luminous_x.

Ciphertext Ciphertext May 24
I read this sitting waiting for my BLS class so Ima comment (do the good stuff) when I get home
Thank you so much for this feedback. Those pesky passive verbs ... I will implement this advice once I return from vacation. Thanks again!
Rawiya13 Rawiya13 Jun 27
Ok, when yoy say secretary's salary, you might want to clear that up. Is she a secretary, or does she have one that doesn't get paid much.
Me too, but because I have no sense of direction and would get lost on the way.
bnlfan bnlfan May 22
Great first chapter. Funny, very well written and sets off a million and one questions in my mind. This is going to be a fun read
sagark22 sagark22 Jul 06
I so like the way you present a situation. With all the expressions. Nice!