Unfashionably Dead

Unfashionably Dead

8.8K Reads 1.2K Votes 48 Part Story
SomewhatDistracted By SomewhatDistracted Completed

Fashionista Cheline Morgan's life is turned upside down following the discovery of a corpse outside the building where her best friend lives. After coming to terms with the death, Cheline attempts to solve the mysterious circumstances surrounding it, while her best friend appears more guilty by the minute. Will she find the murderer before her BFF ends up in jail or worse...dead? 



Cover by the incredibly talented @x_Luminous_x.

Athena38 Athena38 Feb 07
I like the story so far. It flows well but, the term 'get his digits' seems a little outdated. I don't know the preferred social media outlets, but I hear Milennials (sp?) talk about Tinder, Plenty Of Fish, Farmers Only, etc...
SomewhatDistracted SomewhatDistracted May 26, 2016
Thank you so much for this feedback. Those pesky passive verbs ... I will implement this advice once I return from vacation. Thanks again!
Rawiya13 Rawiya13 Jun 27, 2016
Ok, when yoy say secretary's salary, you might want to clear that up. Is she a secretary, or does she have one that doesn't get paid much.
Laughterism Laughterism Dec 22, 2016
Someone's dying and she's over here thinking about her shoes 😂😂😂 love her already
Julidaisy Julidaisy Mar 02
I think yu should either use takes or removes but not both!  I vote for removes!  😊
Julidaisy Julidaisy Mar 02
Way to go!  It sounds great so far!  Lots of great clues to introduce the characters.