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Divergent - Four's POV

Divergent - Four's POV

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thefandomcake By thefandomcake Completed

Suddenly a girl drops down into the net and sits there for a moment, then starts laughing. We all reach our hands out to her, and she takes mine. I look at her and my breath catches. She’s wearing gray. She is Abnegation.
“Thank you,” she says to me.
I look at Lauren and surprise is painted on her face. She quickly hides it with a smirk and says, “Can’t believe it. A Stiff, the first to jump? Unheard of.”
“There’s a reason why she left them, Lauren,” I counter back. I looked at the girl again and studied her. She was small, with a narrow face, a thin, long nose, and blond hair and wide, blue eyes. Nothing special, but she was the first to jump, and that was special to me. “What’s your name?” I asked.
“Um…” She hesitates. I know why. Some Abnegation names just do not fit the Dauntless description. 
“Think about it,” I say, with trace of a smile on my face. “You don’t get to pick again.”
“Tris,” she says firmly. I’m surprised. It didn’t take her as long as it took me. 
“Tris,” Lauren repeats, a grin on her face. She looks at me. “Make the announcement, Four.”
I look over my shoulder and shout, “First jumper--Tris!” Everyone starts cheering and fist pumping, but then another girl drops down into the net, screaming. She’s from Candor, I realize immediately as I look at her black and white clothing. I study her quickly as everyone laughs and cheers. Dark skin, brown eyes, and short, brown hair. Pretty, I guess. But I am not thinking about her.
I place my hand firmly on the Tris’s back and say, “Welcome to Dauntless.”

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Please don't steal my story. I will find you.  [she types jokingly]

Have a nice day. (:

P.S. These characters and the plot don't belong to me; copyright goes to Veronica Roth.

trash652 trash652 May 27
Veronica Roth already wrote a book and it's all Four's point of view.
OMG if anybody doesn't like this not pointing any fingers at trash652 is fudging just mean for sport cus this is an amazing story hope U make more 😈😄
No matter what the heck people say, if they say your dream is stupid, screw them. I hope you get to meet her and show it her. I hope she loves it.
AveryOakes AveryOakes Jan 01
Well, guess whose not going to get any sleep tonight, because their gonna be reading this this 4am. 🙋🏼
Awwwwww it's really sweet of you to write this for her. I'm sure she'd love it. 😊😊😊
ShadowhunterDiverge ShadowhunterDiverge Dec 29, 2016