Divergent - Four's POV

Divergent - Four's POV

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thefandomcake By thefandomcake Completed

Suddenly a girl drops down into the net and sits there for a moment, then starts laughing. We all reach our hands out to her, and she takes mine. I look at her and my breath catches. She’s wearing gray. She is Abnegation.
“Thank you,” she says to me.
I look at Lauren and surprise is painted on her face. She quickly hides it with a smirk and says, “Can’t believe it. A Stiff, the first to jump? Unheard of.”
“There’s a reason why she left them, Lauren,” I counter back. I looked at the girl again and studied her. She was small, with a narrow face, a thin, long nose, and blond hair and wide, blue eyes. Nothing special, but she was the first to jump, and that was special to me. “What’s your name?” I asked.
“Um…” She hesitates. I know why. Some Abnegation names just do not fit the Dauntless description. 
“Think about it,” I say, with trace of a smile on my face. “You don’t get to pick again.”
“Tris,” she says firmly. I’m surprised. It didn’t take her as long as it took me. 
“Tris,” Lauren repeats, a grin on her face. She looks at me. “Make the announcement, Four.”
I look over my shoulder and shout, “First jumper--Tris!” Everyone starts cheering and fist pumping, but then another girl drops down into the net, screaming. She’s from Candor, I realize immediately as I look at her black and white clothing. I study her quickly as everyone laughs and cheers. Dark skin, brown eyes, and short, brown hair. Pretty, I guess. But I am not thinking about her.
I place my hand firmly on the Tris’s back and say, “Welcome to Dauntless.”

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  • dauntless
  • divergent
  • four
  • fourtris
  • tobias
  • tris
Alaskaillistrator Alaskaillistrator Nov 11, 2017
So much thought and effort went into this. Keep doing great and I wish you the best of luck with future books.
Bri_the_bawse Bri_the_bawse Dec 08, 2017
I haven't read that much of it, but I love it you're definetly going to make it big time!!!<3
ThatDC_Gleek5890 ThatDC_Gleek5890 Nov 23, 2017
I’m just gonna comment because everyone else is commenting😉
Didn't tris say this in the movie just before we actually get to meet her(like in the beginning)???
unknownIx_ unknownIx_ Jan 04
There's a book, Four. And at the end it's Veronicas version of this. Your pretty good at writing. But this is the whole book on Tobias. That's great.
BrOwntUrtlE BrOwntUrtlE 5 days ago
Yeah this is good but there actually is a whole book on Tobias already did u know?