I'm not much of a poet, mostly a brain dump. I just put a lot of feeling into this. I really wanted to write this...tell me if you like it or not. Maybe I should start practicing.
@sugoiKYOKItaifu Thank you so much :) I do dabble in it occasionally...I think I will try it :)
It's great, that you have the despair, that suddenly turns to hope, when it turns out the other person is still sticking around, no matter what.
@TheOrangutan Thank you! Especially thank you for taking the time to read my stuff!
I'm rather glad i popped in now. I really liked this, a lovely sentiment contained in a nice piece of work. The line "touching my face with your eyes" was wonderful.
Nicely done old bean, Gav
Hey, this ain't bad ! U can write much better, I can see that ! Cheers !!! ;-D
@Arintez ^_^ you gave me warm fuzzies in my tummy! I have a retarded idiot grin now ! thanks you sooooo much!