Win Her Heart

Win Her Heart

51.4K Reads 3.6K Votes 32 Part Story
Nikki By lovingnikki Updated 5 days ago

#2 in General Fiction (08-11-16)

He was truly, madly, deeply in love with her. 

But there was one problem. She was too innocent for him. He was a bad boy after all.

But instead of being a gentleman, he became a stalker.

Instead of impressing her, he scared her.

Instead of asking her, he forced her.

She said,"You have no right to touch me."

He was speechless. She was right.

He promised himself that day, he will have that right, he will have her heart.


Lets read out.



                              I loved reading this chapter, but I would suggest you make it chapter one instead of a prologue because of its length. 
                              I wanna see what he's gonna do to get her.
-ashash- -ashash- Oct 19
                              Aww such a nice chapter. I like the chemistry betweeen raghav and pihu. I would have liked it more if you added a cast. It's better to imagine the characters that way
                              A lengthy prologue. It's not a bad thing. I understood what the story is about. Your descriptions are apt, but a bit repetitive. Cut down those.
                              Love at first sight! I believe in this. A little bit of description about the people and surroundings will be good.
                              Keep writing.:)
ijay__ ijay__ 4 days ago
                              This was so well written I nearly cried while I was reading. Your dialogues and ability to show just d right emotions is amazing. Keep up d good work
Stanlight Stanlight 3 days ago
                              Aaahhhh L'Amour.
                              I'm a sucker for love at first sight. This was well put together, the emotions you displayed were believable.
Being_a_tomboy Being_a_tomboy 4 days ago
The summary looks promising ....
                              Hope its not disappointing :D