The Sweetest Debt

The Sweetest Debt

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CantHandleMissingYou By gabbyalex Updated Dec 08, 2010 

love poem

Poetry
  • indebted
  • love
  • mistake
  • poem
  • relationship
  • true
gabbyalex gabbyalex Aug 21, 2011 
@izzybelleraine  awww, thanks homie. poetry is beautiful in itself. thx for the comment!
izzybelleraine izzybelleraine Aug 21, 2011 
This is absolutely amazing. :) So sweet. No. Beautiful. I'm so envious because I never could write poetry. :P -voted-
acedreza acedreza Dec 18, 2010 
hahaha, the last four line added to the flavor :P 
                              it would be an honor being sentenced to love u everyday :P (nice i say :P )
                              good one. *likes*
redhots redhots Dec 13, 2010 
Really nice I especially love the part "years of unpaid kisses and embrace tugging in sweet abuse "
                              Really nice :)
AlbeitWeird AlbeitWeird Dec 12, 2010 
by the way I loooooove your use of macaronic rhyme at the end, it was                ah-mazing!!!!
AlbeitWeird AlbeitWeird Dec 12, 2010 
I'm addicted.....seriously. You are a freaking amazing writer!!! I have a few poems, they're really depressing, but now I envy your skillz!!! And, btw, you got my vote, and my fannage(is that a word??)