Eyes Wide Shut

Eyes Wide Shut

3.3K Reads 56 Votes 10 Part Story
MayyahxSmiles By MayyahxSmiles Updated Apr 13, 2011

Alexis is completely broken now. Laying in a hospital bed, having just come out of a coma. She must of been in a serious accident, but cannot remember what. She hasn't seen or heard from her husband to be. But she knows there's something wrong, something that's preventing him from seeing her. But what? No-one's going to tell her, so she's going to have to find out for herself...

trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 23, 2011
This is a good beginning. There is just enough here to hook the reader into going on to read more, which I plan to do after I vote. 
MayyahxSmiles MayyahxSmiles Feb 23, 2011
@Zwriter Aaaw thanks for that :)
                                              Getting me so happy :P
                                               jk THANKS!!!!
PollardWharly PollardWharly Feb 23, 2011
I like it. I really appreciate the style of writing it's written it. Parts of it are written so fluidly it rings in the ears like poetry. :) keep it up!
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 23, 2011
It's a very nice start! LOVE IT! voted :)
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Katt29 Katt29 Feb 23, 2011
It's really good start! :)) Added to my library and VOTED! :))
the_zainab the_zainab Feb 15, 2011
exuse ME YH SUMAYYAH YH YOU NEED TO UPLOAD LIKE NOW YH OK YH OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK KL =D