The New Sakura

The New Sakura

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sakura_haruno_sasuke By sakura_haruno_sasuke Updated Jan 08

sakura get rejected by Sasuke and heartbroken she changed the way she felt about him and everyone she became a badass  now how does saskue feel does he feel bad for what he has done does and does he like the new sakura or the old?

Kaeydenj163 Kaeydenj163 Jan 02
Ehhh it needs spacing out more and it's a little too fast paced... However it's still a good book
SasuSakuSaraUchiha SasuSakuSaraUchiha Jul 16, 2016
Uhhhhhh... I can bearly understand that. Please use "quotation marks".
sakura_haruno_sasuke sakura_haruno_sasuke Aug 11, 2016
She said it isn't good so if it isn't good y bother reading it and I don't want to put these for example "naruto u Baka"!!! If u and yes I'm working on my spelling cuz I type fast so I press wrong button sometimes so yeah
realsakvra realsakvra Aug 10, 2016
Its good but just fix you spelling and add full words don't forget to add " these for example "Naruto you Baka "!!! Something like that and ^ she's giving you an honest feedback to help you and letting you know other than that its pretty good
sakura_haruno_sasuke sakura_haruno_sasuke Aug 11, 2016
I'll start doing it damn all u ppl are annoying I'll doing okay ppl
Jesus what is happening? I could barely get a few minutes in before I had to stop because of the immature language and lack of grammar. How old are you? Have you heard of the English language?