sakura get rejected by Sasuke and heartbroken she changed the way she felt about him and everyone she became a badass now how does saskue feel does he feel bad for what he has done does and does he like the new sakura or the old?
don't listen to them k? i was horrible to when i started. i like it.
my grammer sucks and still sucks. so u deffently have skill, k.
Ehhh it needs spacing out more and it's a little too fast paced... However it's still a good book
Uhhhhhh... I can bearly understand that. Please use "quotation marks".
She said it isn't good so if it isn't good y bother reading it and I don't want to put these for example "naruto u Baka"!!! If u and yes I'm working on my spelling cuz I type fast so I press wrong button sometimes so yeah
Its good but just fix you spelling and add full words don't forget to add " these for example "Naruto you Baka "!!! Something like that and ^ she's giving you an honest feedback to help you and letting you know other than that its pretty good