That British Girl

That British Girl

6.3K Reads 166 Votes 6 Part Story
Felicia By FelZiz Updated Nov 28, 2015

Story about a british girl that moved to america at a difficult time in her life. Then she meets boys from her new school that bring hell or happiness.

vantablack vantablack Jan 30, 2011
I really like the cover for this story (I quite like Avril).
                              
colesandra20 colesandra20 Dec 23, 2010
good good :) i liked the british bit.
                              
                              but just a little bit more descriptions, like say the place, a person's appearance etc. but overall, instant like :)
anakelia anakelia Dec 23, 2010
I like the fact that you didn't skim from the first class and then straight to lunch. I don't know how to explain it but i hope you know what i mean. 
miley246 miley246 Dec 17, 2010
I think you nailed the British girl down what with the accent, pride and  whatever. I strongly advise you to give her more background since British are obsessed with cleanliness and are neat freaks. Maybe you should add that. Otherwise, it's gr8.
RaraEve RaraEve Dec 16, 2010
Really good so far! Keep up the good work!!
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chaterboxxx chaterboxxx Dec 15, 2010
hey you could put her thoughts into italics so that it doesnt look like she's talking to other characters when she's not suppose to.