Not So Hidden Desire

52 Part Story 2M Reads 10.8K Votes
Danilynn Louvel By Danilynn Completed
Katie is a 31 year old elementary school teacher who doesn't like to be told what to do. Owen is the typical 32 year old,  he's a man but the child still comes out full force at times. Owen comes back to town without telling Katie, and is currently working as a nurse in the ER. Katie loves Owen, and Owen loves Katie but who will make the first move between these two best friends. Will fate bring them together or push them apart
that happened to me. its not a pleasant feeling. i was born with the curse of being a klutz. i love this story because its aweeeesoooome. four thumbs up
woah! cool! lol haha
                                    So funny I'm into with my bestfriend too.. and he's leaving me too, but I wish We'll end up like that! lol
The story flows and keeps the readers entertain and your MC is very funny. My favorite scene is at the beginning when her skirt was folded up for the neighborhood to see, hilarious. I love it already!
The main character is funny and kinda a klutz lol idk, just the purse thin' the house thin'...yeah hah. Hmm, Owen is okay...and cute <3
                                      I usually give tips, but you don't need them haha you have a million reads, so what ever you're doing keep doing it xD 
                                    Really good read.
Entertaining and a pretty decent flow. :) I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
I like all the description and drama you put into the first chapter.  I think it is a pretty good story so far.