Ephemeral

Ephemeral

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Emery By Emeryn Updated Jan 03, 2012

There is love. There is existence. There is hope. There is complication.  Living day after day, we notice as time pass by, but our hearts remain our true home. And we will never let go. This is what life is...or maybe it's just high school.

incisrongirl incisrongirl Dec 30, 2011
Sentence structure needs work, but it's an interesting, relatable, though slightly angsty beginning.
MyHeartIsInk MyHeartIsInk Dec 26, 2011
I really like this! I think it's awesome how you put a deeper meaning into this without it being overhwhelming. Of course, I'm definitely continuing :D
permafrost permafrost Dec 20, 2011
Love the words in italics. Give this a very mysterious feel. (:
GenXblogger GenXblogger Dec 20, 2011
I enjoy the piece opening and ending with some poetry - nice idea!
Thebookangels Thebookangels Dec 19, 2011
I absolutely enjoyed your writing since the summary...especially the "maybe it's just high school", you've got a great talent :)
                              those quotes in italics i nthe beginning and end just polish up your work :)
                              Good job! :D
Loveoverhate Loveoverhate Dec 19, 2011
I rather enjoyed it. Very descripted and I am excited to read more