Kidnapped by a Vampire

Kidnapped by a Vampire

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Jokers_Heart By Jokers_Heart Completed

All Polly has ever wanted was a bitter sweet life. She wanted to become a professional skate boarder or even just a photographer. But one day her dreams were taken away from her as she was out and about town where she was taken from her hometown.

Throughout the course though she falls in love without meaning too. But with this love comes a lot of pain and sacrifices she never thought that she would ever make.

  • angel
  • fallen
  • life
  • love
  • vampire
Gee_112 Gee_112 Jan 22
Third paragraph shouldn’t it read “as I lay there”?  I believe in the previous paragraph it’s mentioned her wrists and feet are chained to the bed and she can’t get up.
- - May 28, 2016
U don't give your prisoners water. Basic 'I'm kidnapped by evil dudes that want to steal my virginity or whatever' scenario.  No, but it is good, a great start too.
Laucutie_13 Laucutie_13 Nov 28, 2016
I'm sorry did I read that right or did she really just say that she has started to fall in love with her kidnapper when she met her less than 48 hours
TaressaWildenberg TaressaWildenberg Apr 12, 2016
I think you need to explain a little more because that is harder for a reader to believe that a person could fall for their kidnapper without explaining why. Otherwise your story is really good. 😃
pollykilroy pollykilroy Jan 29, 2011
polly is such an awesome name;)
                              but anyway - your story is pretty good! keep it up! :D