Kidnapped by a Vampire

Kidnapped by a Vampire

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All Polly has ever wanted was a bitter sweet life. She wanted to become a professional skate boarder or even just a photographer. But one day her dreams were taken away from her as she was out and about town where she was taken from her hometown.

Throughout the course though she falls in love without meaning too. But with this love comes a lot of pain and sacrifices she never thought that she would ever make.

kitty2o4 kitty2o4 May 28
U don't give your prisoners water. Basic 'I'm kidnapped by evil dudes that want to steal my virginity or whatever' scenario.  No, but it is good, a great start too.
Laucutie_13 Laucutie_13 Nov 28
I'm sorry did I read that right or did she really just say that she has started to fall in love with her kidnapper when she met her less than 48 hours
I think you need to explain a little more because that is harder for a reader to believe that a person could fall for their kidnapper without explaining why. Otherwise your story is really good. 😃
gypsiroze gypsiroze Sep 10, 2014
so far so good  im a vampire story colector Nd so far I, like this
tigerund tigerund Apr 10, 2014
Good book, but you need more description about how things look.
ambieeeeeeeeee ambieeeeeeeeee Nov 09, 2013
She is goin through living hell ain't she haha lol awesome book keep up the good work