Immortals Live Forever (Terminated)

Immortals Live Forever (Terminated)

6.9K Reads 157 Votes 23 Part Story
Carla-Kate Laudani By LittleMadHatter Completed

Don't judge this story! PLEASE READ IT BEFORE YOU DO ! Onyxia-Kailie D'luna's life is in a tangled mess, between reach queendom and picking a king, her life is in crisis mode. Her farther, whom she has a very low relasionship with, pick her future husband, but he's a total a-hole. She still has feelings for her ex, even though he cheated on her with her worst enemy, he's still the farther of her two daughters. So when it's down to the bottom line who will she pick?

  • forever
  • live
  • ­immortals
LittleMadHatter LittleMadHatter Jun 24, 2011
@DarkAmbition Lol, i think she could do that in less than a second 
DarkAmbition DarkAmbition May 18, 2011
Marcus needs to realise that Kailie can make him her b**ch any second now, i like Dom he seems like a nice guy
warriormaidenxxx warriormaidenxxx Feb 18, 2011
oh, p.s., i really like the name of the chapter. just needed to get that out there =]
warriormaidenxxx warriormaidenxxx Feb 18, 2011
i really like this!!!! i really like your writing style =] i am in awe of, and love, your long chapters. i can NEVER make long chapters.... such a fail... =]
                              but yeah congrats because this is REALLY GOOD!
LittleMadHatter LittleMadHatter Jan 24, 2011
@shelbylw03 Ok then. Still, Thank you sooo much. This means the world to me. I'll be most happy too read some of your work during my school break-times. An eye for an eye =D
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Jan 24, 2011
Yeah I actually prefer long chapters because once I start reading I don't want to stop.  So definately don't change it, because I love this story.  I was just telling you some advice I have gotten to try and make more people read my stories lol.