A Lost Boy Trying To Find His Girl (A Guys Story)

A Lost Boy Trying To Find His Girl (A Guys Story)

929 Reads 17 Votes 10 Part Story
Brian By bck000 Updated Nov 29, 2011

A college Boy, Tom, meets a Girl, Jill, and falls madly in love with her.  However, she distrusts guys and is not sure she can be with one.  They fast become  friends and have many adventures together but will Tom get what he wants,  the heart of the girl he loves?  Find out!

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Soul_Ninja Soul_Ninja Nov 18, 2011
Hey This is Cool!, and the Jill girl:)wow..keep up the great work!!!
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Fictionwritter Fictionwritter Nov 17, 2011
This is really good. :)  I like your discription of Julls hair. :)
xXxMarilynsBitchxXx xXxMarilynsBitchxXx Nov 16, 2011
@bck000 I LOVEW HOW you described the physical apperence of Jill ?:) she seems soo pretty 8) good job
bck000 bck000 Nov 16, 2011
@xxDanielleMariexx thanks, I wrote it two years ago and never had an editor for the first 2 chapters.  So I am sure there are issues with grammar.