Mate Or Not I Don't Want You (UN-EDITED...CURRENTLY BEING EDITED)

Mate Or Not I Don't Want You (UN-EDITED...CURRENTLY BEING EDITED)

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JustNadiene By JustNadiene Completed

It all started with rejection .

Okay so hears the deal my name is Avrial and I ran away from my so called pack and my mate that rejected me but now I have to go back my new pack is under attack and there is only 9 of us and we need back up. Now.
  
 Sure, I'm not super model pretty and I'm not skinny either, I'm determined to get healthy and my mate Derek White hes a player and an ass he rejected me its his fault I ran away well his and my brother they all hate me even my dad liked my brother more  my mom? my mom on the other hand always loved me...yeah too bad she and dad died.

they were killed they were walking and got ran over also I'm not looking forward to going back there expectantly after my mate rejected me and I bet he probably haven't changed since...

you meet Averial now time to hear Derek's side of the story I know I can be an ass some times and some times I take it a bit to far where to start...

ok so I rejected my mate and I have regreted it ever since so what I like to play around that is until I feel a big pain in my chest fourteen days after I rejected her well its no my fault I rejected she fat and ugly..ok just fat

A pack called day break is looking for the strongest protection for there pack so what can I do me being the alpha and all I might as well help them my wolf is telling me I have to or I will regret it...I didn't learn till later that my mate that hates me is in that pack Averial...

Ummm u need to check ur grammar. It doesn't make sense what u wrote and it's hard to tell what ur talking about.
you need to fix your grammar
                              I've given up reading this book because of it.
QueenJayC QueenJayC Mar 12
It was amazing 😍
                              
                              But a tip is to separate it into different paragraphs, so people/viewers could comment on a paragraph and not the whole chapter. :) Wish you luck 👍🏻 Have a good rest of the day :) Unless it Night... have a good night then...
... follow me he says so she follows him... has she never seen a horror movie or told about stranger danger?! (Not being mean I'm just joking about her decision)
savagemaloley savagemaloley Jul 17, 2016
I thought it said the power coming out of his nuts😂😂😂😂
savagemaloley savagemaloley Jul 17, 2016
Wat???
                              I am do confused with the paragraph mentioning Derek white