The Devil's touch

The Devil's touch

266 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
Nightsbeauty By Nightsbeauty Completed

Who hasn't been heartbroken before? If you haven't, you're one of the lucky ones. But be careful; a guy will break your heart when you least expect it, so here's a little insight to help you prepare.

  • boyfriend
  • broken
  • brokenheart
  • deceive
  • devil
  • handsome
  • hate
  • heart
  • love
  • selfishness
  • sin
nihaa- nihaa- Jun 08, 2012
I agree with @kendramarieee with the fact that it's too straight forward and not enough build up. Otherwise, the poem is lovely =)
xPerfectDisasterx xPerfectDisasterx May 30, 2012
Great! I'm looking forward to more! :D My ex sounds exactly like the description haha.
Nightsbeauty Nightsbeauty Dec 19, 2011
Thank you so much this was one of those poems someone writes just to get their emotions ot haha and ya the punctuation i couldnt decide on but ill fix it soon and add more to the poem or add more poems in general?
prettygirl4567 prettygirl4567 Dec 19, 2011
I love it!!!!! Are you gonna add some more?! You might want to put punctuation in thier thought understanding it better, but i love the whole thing:)!