draco's little sister

draco's little sister

30.9K Reads 965 Votes 18 Part Story
pandy589 By pandy589 Completed

people always look at me and wonder why im with people like the malfoys i dont look anything like them so i cant be related to them unfortunately that is untrue i wish it was true but its not. im draco's little sister hated by everyone because im different i am the forgotten malfoy.

FallenAngel3321 FallenAngel3321 Mar 30, 2017
The story line is pretty good but you really need to capitalize letters and add punctuation. It makes it really confusing to read.
DinaRiddle770 DinaRiddle770 Oct 24, 2017
What happened to capital letters? Every time you write a 'i' by itself you make it in to a capital letter. Every time you begin a new sentence a capital letter, and every time you write a name you do it with a capital letter. But other than that it is very good!
jigeumkkaji jigeumkkaji Oct 26, 2017
A bite from a Basilisk kills. The only cure known is a tear of a pheonix, which can heal any-everything.
DinaRiddle770 DinaRiddle770 Oct 24, 2017
Also that is the end of the year, sorry if my comments sound rude it's just I'm really into perfect writing!
RanaeIdk RanaeIdk Feb 24
Wait what? Thia goes way too fast. I'm not comprehending ANYTHING!!!