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When summer ends

When summer ends

24.9K Reads 298 Votes 21 Part Story
Katy Wormald By KateLeighWormald Updated Jan 14, 2012

Jodie harper is a typical sixteen year old girl who hates school and loves her friends. Life is turned upside down for her though when she meets Declan on her summer vacation. The weeks fly by and soon she has to return home, where she meets bad boy Cole at her school. What will Jodie decide to do, and what will happen when summer ends?

Autumn_Moon Autumn_Moon Jan 08, 2012
Great description, a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. But overall an enjoyable read! Great work! :)
JesusFreak JesusFreak Jan 03, 2012
Some of your puntuation is a little off, maybe you should consider getting an editor. But other than that I thought it was good.
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune Dec 28, 2011
You didn't have to put early this morning part in there, saw no mistakes, nicely written.
MarineLynn MarineLynn Dec 28, 2011
Like I said below, you have errors regarding your dialogue. I'm a picky reader so it bothers me. Try fixing it or having an editor do it. Each detail is important. Another thing you're doing is that you're capitalizing the speaker tag. You don't capitalize it unless it's a name.
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Dec 18, 2011
this was good, you had good descriptions, well written, and you had me hooked from the start.
Ladyknight1 Ladyknight1 Dec 17, 2011
Very good start. Very interesting. Looks like her summer is going to be a very iteresting one.