This is a collection of my poetry that is somewhat sad and dark.
@robe9425 I see what you mean about the punctuation, and I know that it would work with punctuation, but that is how I wrote it to be. Thanks for commenting.
I like the questions and repetition in this poem. It creates good rhythm. and I noticed that there isn't any punctuation. :/ I guess it's not completely necessary because of the consistency and the natural pauses - but that's my opinion and I think it's creative.
I agree the metaphors in here are really good and the last line reveals it. Good job here.
u know i think this was the first poem of your that i ever read.
@Whiskeynscotch @Vanhessa I know this has been a long time waiting but thank you for your comments!
@CalebPaul Thanks...I felt that there needed to be a way to describe what its like.