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Poetry-The Dark Ones

Poetry-The Dark Ones

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Michelle or Vix I guess...Whichever you prefer... By MichelleGossamer22 Completed

This is a collection of my poetry that is somewhat sad and dark.

  • death
  • dâm
  • emotion
  • flood
  • one
  • pain
  • tears
  • turmoil
MichelleGossamer22 MichelleGossamer22 Nov 22, 2011
@robe9425 I see what you mean about the punctuation, and I know that it would work with punctuation, but that is how I wrote it to be. Thanks for commenting.
JPKent JPKent Nov 21, 2011
I like the questions and repetition in this poem. It creates good rhythm. and I noticed that there isn't any punctuation. :/ I guess it's not completely necessary because of the consistency and the natural pauses - but that's my opinion and I think it's creative.
                              
                              Will
JPKent JPKent Nov 21, 2011
I agree the metaphors in here are really good and the last line reveals it. Good job here. 
                              
                              Will
Vanhessa Vanhessa Nov 17, 2011
u know i think this was the first poem of your that i ever read.
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MichelleGossamer22 MichelleGossamer22 Nov 16, 2011
@Whiskeynscotch @Vanhessa I know this has been a long time waiting but thank you for your comments!
MichelleGossamer22 MichelleGossamer22 Mar 04, 2011
@CalebPaul Thanks...I felt that there needed to be a way to describe what its like.