Blinded By Love (incomplete)

Blinded By Love (incomplete)

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notsorapunzel_ By notsorapunzel_ Updated Dec 30, 2010

Sholan and Justice used to be best friends when they were younger but when they lose contact things change – they change. When they meet up three years later, things are very different for both of them. Justice now has a steady boyfriend and Sholan appears to be jealous. Is Justice's boyfriend really gay? Is Justice pregnant? Will her brother Jedd ever recover from his traumatising accident? A series of unfortunate events occur and will there really be a happy ending?

nadiaalexandra nadiaalexandra May 27, 2011
I like it and i admire you for telling everyone where to shove their bad comments....you dont deserve bad comments you are amzing :)
rockmysocks rockmysocks Apr 11, 2011
It's good! :D
                              I came cause the cover kinda freaked me out o_o
marabelli marabelli Dec 31, 2010
This detailed writing is really good. If you changed all ur chapters remember not to miss out on important things that happen.  
                              
                              The story is sort of cleshay, but you can never get tired of a story like this. Well done!
folgates folgates Dec 30, 2010
Your description is pretty good! But your grammer could be better. When people have too many grammer mastakes, it takes the reader out of the imaginary world for a moment. Try proffreading before putting up a chapter :)
anakelia anakelia Dec 12, 2010
I love the fact that you took @ambiance suggestion to heart and went back and changed it. It shows that you're really serious about your writing. A lot of people will ignore critisism if they don't like what they read even though its meant to make their stories better. 
                              *thumbs up to you*
notsorapunzel_ notsorapunzel_ Dec 11, 2010
@ambiance
                              
                              ive read yuur comment and i agree with yuuh so ive changed it :)
                              
                              thanks