my little adventure

my little adventure

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KAT :) By tabbykat45 Updated May 15, 2011

IT IS A SECRET YOU HAVE TO READ THE STORY TO FIND OUT ....OR JUST THE FIRST PAGE IT HAS THE SUMMARY!!

ShadowHorse ShadowHorse Sep 10, 2012
Hi I read the first chapter! it's good but I hope you don't mind some critism... I don't want to be mean, but try using less puntuation marks, and try describing things more..
                              :) hope that helps
tabbykat45 tabbykat45 Apr 12, 2012
Okay people i need a new summary, cause this one sucks.... can anyone help me out???? please please please :) with a cherry ontop??? :)
Stardustxo Stardustxo Dec 14, 2010
Hey! 
                              Sorry!! I just got your message now :) I haven;t really been on wattpad. 
                              neat Chapter! 
                              Oh, and it''s Spaghetti, i think ^-^ 
                              ♥
                              
                              -Olivia.xo 
Stardustxo Stardustxo Dec 07, 2010
Tehe. 
                              I have to agree with the shortness... 
                              but it's good =] 
                              
                              Continue! Don't ever give up ♥
                              
                              xo. Olivia.