my little adventure

my little adventure

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KAT :) By tabbykat45 Updated May 15, 2011

IT IS A SECRET YOU HAVE TO READ THE STORY TO FIND OUT ....OR JUST THE FIRST PAGE IT HAS THE SUMMARY!!

    ShadowHorse ShadowHorse Sep 10, 2012
    Hi I read the first chapter! it's good but I hope you don't mind some critism... I don't want to be mean, but try using less puntuation marks, and try describing things more..
                                  :) hope that helps
    tabbykat45 tabbykat45 Apr 12, 2012
    Okay people i need a new summary, cause this one sucks.... can anyone help me out???? please please please :) with a cherry ontop??? :)
    Stardustxo Stardustxo Dec 14, 2010
    Hey! 
                                  Sorry!! I just got your message now :) I haven;t really been on wattpad. 
                                  neat Chapter! 
                                  Oh, and it''s Spaghetti, i think ^-^ 
                                  ♥
                                  
                                  -Olivia.xo 
    Stardustxo Stardustxo Dec 07, 2010
    Tehe. 
                                  I have to agree with the shortness... 
                                  but it's good =] 
                                  
                                  Continue! Don't ever give up ♥
                                  
                                  xo. Olivia.