The Overweight Target {COMPLETED}

The Overweight Target {COMPLETED}

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HiddenStars99 By HiddenStars99 Completed

Jennifer is 18 and overweight, she became this way when her parents fought, She goes to Durwood high where Joel is captain of the football team, one night, there is a drinking game and she is the target.

CloverKingston CloverKingston Dec 04, 2016
My school was so different every class room was a different color and we painted our lockers the color we wanted.
panda_girl_2k19 panda_girl_2k19 Mar 10, 2016
Wtf she is not fat!!!! Gosh by the way the author was describing her was like 300 lb!!!
queencracra queencracra Nov 05, 2016
Girl I weigh 104 pounds and I don't have a a big belly you look beautiful so shut up and be proud
Canusend Canusend May 18, 2016
I weigh so much more then her and im only 14. She is probably supper pretty
alex222009 alex222009 Jun 27, 2016
Nothing is wrong with your writing. I love it and I love your story!
radataz2cool radataz2cool Jul 28, 2016
Your writing is very good so far, I like the story line. The only thing I can see is misspelled words here and there. Also there are a few different sentences that could be reworded. Keep up the AwEsOmE job!! 😊