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Blindness my Saviour (Going into Revision)

Blindness my Saviour (Going into Revision)

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Zeus Winters (Yes that's my name) By ZeuZeu Updated Jan 07, 2013

Darisko Korad became blind after a trauma he really just wanted to forget.
As seven year old boy he was brutalized by someone who was trusted by his parents, and as a result they paid with their lives. Now ten years later in Oxford University he faces a possible one sided love and his nightmare is on trial.
But someone doesn't want his life to be normal, they want him to remember, and they want him to see all that he's done whilst he's been drowning in his own sorrows.

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Nagini1 Nagini1 Mar 12, 2012
I agree with below. Or extend it to another day he tells him.
XchocogirlX XchocogirlX Jan 02, 2012
I agree with everything the person below me write and if I had to add up just a little bit somehow the scenes kind of jump from one scene to another but then again good job.
Crystalfire Crystalfire Nov 28, 2011
Woah... Intense. ANYWAY! The chapter was awesome, just some constructed criticism.. did i spell that right? Yeah i did.. what was i saying? Bleh. Oh yeah, try and describe the scenes and their emotions a bit more,  it would be tonnes better!! Anywho, great chappie, cant wait till the next!!!:D
Crystalfire Crystalfire Nov 18, 2011
Woah, this is actually really good! I love it how their best friends, and Dark sounds hot, even with the lilac bags under his eyes. Upload soon, il try and get my fans to read this!