Crestfall (On Hold)

Crestfall (On Hold)

338 Reads 7 Votes 4 Part Story
Rafhael Mangalao By agent_sykes03 Updated Dec 17, 2011

My name is Jared. I am a normal human, seriously. But I started doubting about it when a luminous stone fell from the sky. Different kinds of magicians, wizards, and even monster chased me. Now, is that normal? I don't think so.

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agent_sykes03 agent_sykes03 Dec 18, 2011
@OptionalAngel thanks ! yeah, i also felt that i have been skipping some details, but i'm working on it .. thanks fr the vote ! appreciated it :)
IvoryAuthor IvoryAuthor Dec 17, 2011
First have to say interesting cover, second good beginning although it was a little choppy in some places. Good plot and interesting twist with the sister. Voted!