Some Poems of Mine

Some Poems of Mine

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Brytt By BryttBrutal Completed

So these are some poems I wrote a year or so ago. I previously had them up on another site but I decided it was time to put them up here on Wattpad. They are kind of somber, depressing, and talk about death a lot but it's what I was feeling at the time. I hope you enjoy the read. 
P.S: If you don't like them don't comment. I think it's quite rude. 
Thank you

  • alone
  • birthday
  • broken
  • cheating
  • closet
  • death
  • forever
  • giving
  • guilt
  • hate
  • heart
  • hell
  • life
  • love
  • murder
  • pain
  • sadness
  • save
  • slumber
  • suicide
  • surrender
  • tourture
  • voices
  • wish
xXhardcoreXx xXhardcoreXx Mar 30, 2012
@BryttBrutal This is amazing!! You are amazing!! It's has so much feeling to it, and high quality poetry!! I wish I could compose stuff like this! 
                              
                              -Hannah xx
blackberriestar blackberriestar Mar 24, 2012
i really like it and i kinda liked the line " the daughter you hate". 
                              its real good
Skyhawk33 Skyhawk33 Jan 18, 2012
This sounds more like a compressed story than a poem but it is good
BryttBrutal BryttBrutal Jan 05, 2012
@Amazerful 
                              Thank you so much. Honestly it took me a while to get it to this point. Poems aren't what I'm best at but I'm glad you liked it. :3
Amazerful Amazerful Jan 05, 2012
Wow, this was heart breaking. I can relate to this poem. 
                              What I liked about this poem was that it told a short story. Great work!!
                              Telling a story within a poems seems so hard to me.......