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The Suicide Note

The Suicide Note

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Morgan By a_southern_melody Updated Mar 05, 2015

Rebecca or Becca as her best friend calls her has all ways been the loner child. When she was just eight years old her parents were killed in a car accident killed exactly on impact. So the state sent her of cores to an orphanage. Not one home she was sent to ever lasted they always sent her back. But unfortunately one family, the Luther’s, keep her but not for the right reasons; the state gives the family a certain amount of money to take care of her but none of the money goes to her. They keep it and use it for them and their children. Becca gets the old hand me downs, she doesn’t own anything new. She’s been with them since she was ten and they do terrible things to her.

Becca is seventeen and is really getting sick and tired of the Luther’s. She is getting tired of all the scars, bruises, and the broken bones. She gives herself a time limit on life. Yes what an ungodly thing to do, but she’d rather be in his hands then in the hands of the Luther’s and suffering. She leaves a note to her best friend but he finds it. But is it in time to save her, or does he get it a second too late?

  • romance
glittergirl glittergirl Aug 16, 2012
I really thought she wasn't going to jump but she did. I just hope she lived. Anyways this was a good prologue but there were just a few grammatical errors. I think this was a good cliffhanger. Other than that I can't find anything wrong with it.
Jetice Jetice Aug 10, 2012
I like it so far! Has lots of emotion, thats what i like about i guess lol but anywhoo.....Next chapter!
a_southern_melody a_southern_melody Aug 09, 2012
@desperateforchange Thank you and I really didn't sound rude! I'm sorry if I did!
a_southern_melody a_southern_melody Aug 09, 2012
@desperateforchange I love your imput, but seeing as this is a chapter that is not finished things will be missing, this chapter is supposed to be a clife hanger for later on in the story, this is to just help grab my readers attintion!
a_southern_melody a_southern_melody Aug 04, 2012
@MichelleZa @CoralinaCook , Thank y'all so much I'll update asap:)
a_southern_melody a_southern_melody Jul 29, 2012
@Armiella Thank you I chose Kayden but I guess I didnt edit enough:)