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Breathe

Breathe

12.9K Reads 459 Votes 13 Part Story
Keonna Brown By RadiateYourLove Updated May 31, 2012

Kylie has always been that friendly, happy, outgoing person in highschool that every normal teenager envied. Her perfect grades, perfect attendance, and perfect smile was known all over her little town of Allendale Ohio. 
So what happened when perfect little Kylie tries to commit suicide by crashing her car into the town's river? She soon starts too become the mock of Allendale. Isolated and depressed, she literally stops talking for months. Her family or friends can't understand why Kylie suddenly becomes this way. Her mom feels there is nothing else left for her to do except send her to live with her rich father in Virginia who can pay for a psychologist. 
   Breathe is about a girl who feels as if she has nothing to live for anymore. Given a new life, will Kylie learn to live, love, and breathe again?...Or is it already too late?
WARNING: This is not you're average lonely girl moves and finds love story. Very twisted plot with an unexpected ending.

  • abuse
  • angel
  • arrogant
  • attempt
  • beautiful
  • betrayal
  • body
  • breathe
  • bully
  • crazy
  • date
  • daughter
  • death
  • depressed
  • depression
  • drama
  • dream
  • drug
  • drugs
  • emotional
  • experience
  • family
  • father
  • fiction
  • friendly
  • girl
  • hate
  • help
  • highschool
  • house
  • jerk
  • jerks
  • light
  • love
  • mansion
  • mean
  • mental
  • mother
  • mute
  • new
  • nonchalant
  • obe
  • out
  • pain
  • pills
  • psycho
  • psychologist
  • quiet
  • relationships
  • rich
  • sad
  • school
  • silence
  • sister
  • sisters
  • spanish
  • speak
  • sucid
  • suicidal
  • suicide
  • teen
  • teenager
  • teens
  • therapist
  • tranquility
  • weird
  • white
Xsabrina98X Xsabrina98X Jul 04, 2015
true I always say that but I learn in life to never say that again cause I learn valuable lessons
PutSomethingIn PutSomethingIn May 22, 2012
Great start! I like the suspense of why she killed herself and how she does not remember doing it it's an interesting concept! Great job :)
BellsxSweets BellsxSweets May 20, 2012
Its pretty interesting, and I only read the 1st chapter. I think this is a great story. :3 I should say
MouldyBanana MouldyBanana May 20, 2012
A really, really, really good start(: I loved the flow and the context of the chapter (: The thing that I loved the most is your description and structer, I love how you didn't reveal everything at once but revealed it gradually throughout the chapter. Really good job(: Well done :D
ThinkHappy ThinkHappy May 20, 2012
First off, I love the cover!(: 
                              Secondly, this is definitely original. Your writing style is so easy to relate to not to mention detailed. I think your story will go far. :3
xxMirror_Mirrorxx xxMirror_Mirrorxx May 20, 2012
Such an interesting start. I really like the description and the fact that she had what she saw as perfection but lost it. Nowdays you don't see many stories where there is such a plot, or at least such writing. I will continue being a silent reader.