The Summer I Babysat

The Summer I Babysat

2.7K Reads 75 Votes 8 Part Story
Kalyssa By PutItOnLoop Updated Nov 26, 2011

Seventeen year-old Sophia Martin just wanted some extra cash to help pay for a new laptop. When she heard that her mother’s co-worker needs a babysitter every Saturday during summer break Sophia can’t help but take up the job, considering it pays ten dollars an hour. It all seems pretty easy, until Sophia then learns not only is she babysitting sweet five-year-old Emma, but she is also watching over Emma’s eighteen year old brother who can’t be trusted alone at home.

yeeehaara yeeehaara Nov 25, 2012
Oh and btw you change tense a bit in the last few paragraphs, so u might want to edit that :) But other than that, really good!!! :D
yeeehaara yeeehaara Nov 25, 2012
Awesome chapter!!! Great start, I look forward to the rest of the story :)
gigilee gigilee Jul 22, 2012
Wow love this so much it's seems a long time scone u have posted so I guess ur not writing any more wish u would
LoveToWrite0089 LoveToWrite0089 Nov 30, 2011
I am loving this! I am adding this to my library so I can read it later tonight!!
                              
                              :) great work!
wannabeactresse wannabeactresse Nov 23, 2011
lol its a really good story, i have voted for you and fanned, check out mine and hopefullly do the same?
PutItOnLoop PutItOnLoop Nov 23, 2011
@XliveItUpO Thanks for the feedback, and whoops I didn't spot the double word use. I'm like that too, I don't like have the same words to close together, but I missed that one. Once my dad is off the computer I'll fix it. Until then, thanks for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy this story! :)