I'm Sorry, Stefan

I'm Sorry, Stefan

8.8K Reads 275 Votes 17 Part Story
Carolyn By purplecat Completed

Maya and Stefan have been friends since they were in diapers. Stefan thought he knew everything about Maya, right up until the day she killed herself. Now all he has is a letter and Maya's cryptic school friend to figure out why. But some secrets, perhaps, should be left with the dead.

  • bag
  • blue
  • boy
  • break-up
  • bullying
  • death
  • fault
  • find
  • flashback
  • forest
  • forget
  • friend
  • friends
  • funeral
  • girl
  • girlfriend
  • hate
  • hurt
  • kids
  • kiss
  • letter
  • love
  • mean
  • note
  • scared
  • school
  • secrets
  • self-esteem
  • song
  • sorry
  • suicide
  • talk
  • text
purplecat purplecat Apr 06, 2013
@Angi93 Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the rest too. :)
Angi93 Angi93 Apr 06, 2013
Amazing start, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story :)
purplecat purplecat Aug 01, 2012
@CyberPunks Thank you so much for the comment and the critism! that's really helpful. I'll be reading and commenting on yours tomorrow. :D
CyberPunks CyberPunks Aug 01, 2012
This is a good beginning. Good suspense, and the letter was good and seemed heartfelt. Maybe a little too much of the phrase 'the girl'. The end was also good, and I like this length for the prologue. Not many spelling/grammar mistakes, which I really like! Great descriptions as well
purplecat purplecat Apr 22, 2012
@HoneyLemonade aww, i cried while writing it, too. so happy that you liked it. :) hope you can read on!
silly_missy silly_missy Mar 18, 2012
wow im speechless. My mout is open .. Maya sounds so sweet but wish she hadn't killed herself... Can't wait to meet stefan..