Things Change (ON HOLD)

Things Change (ON HOLD)

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nia_babii By UniqueAngel98 Updated Jun 13, 2012

Amanda White is a seventeen year old girl who is completely invisible and only has three close friends. 

Aaron Touchstone is your eighteen year old quarterback who is loved by everyone.'

When he sees Amanda's new look he falls more in love when her than he did from that day in detention he had with her.

Amanda and Aaron spends lots of their time together just hanging out and talking about their personal lives with each other. 

Can they end up with each other or will someone else come along and make Amanda change her feelings for Aaron?

UniqueAngel98 UniqueAngel98 Apr 10, 2012
@CleoPatra28  thanks 4 the feedback but I'm not continuing this story I'm just not feeling it I mite rewrite but i turned out not 2 like this story
CleoPatra28 CleoPatra28 Apr 10, 2012
I lik the story line but slow it down girl! Ur rushing through it like it's a race!! Put some more detail in it put stuff lik, wats she's thinking wat she's seeing wat she's hearing and dnt rush cause it doesn't make the story that interesting if u do, but keep writing I kno it'll turn out great!!!