Fight For The Finish (Editing)

Fight For The Finish (Editing)

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Lexie By SentFromHeaven Updated Jan 09

My name is Nala Timbers, I'm 17 years old. I got taken away from my family to fight. 2 players fight against 2 other players until they either get badly hurt or die. It's a very tough sport to entertain people but, who knows, maybe I'll end up warming up to it eventually.

NOTE: I wrote most of this when I was younger, therefore, there might be quite a few spelling errors. I apologize! I'm doing some MAJOR editing, slowly but surely!

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AshaND AshaND Jul 28, 2014
Sorry I'm saying this 2 years too late. I love how your story is similar to the Hunger Games :) are you a THG fan?
zozolovesxoxo zozolovesxoxo Mar 04, 2012
The idea is pretty good, but i spot a few grammar errors. Like you sometimes switch present tense to past tense, and it's confusing sometimes:) but other than that, it's good work!
B3Crazy B3Crazy Feb 14, 2012
Hey Lexie :) can you read my Hunger Games fan fiction????????/ I need your opinion girlie! :) talk to you later! luv ya
MinutesToMonths MinutesToMonths Jan 30, 2012
I really liked it.... just some spelling errors that confused me a little :/
                              And I think maybe a little more description would make this perfect :D
SentFromHeaven SentFromHeaven Jan 12, 2012
@AnnaMareeHughes Thanks! I worked really hard on it! and I will:D
SentFromHeaven SentFromHeaven Jan 05, 2012
@MolltFergusonFutrell Aww! Thank you soo much! that really mean alot to me! I'm glad you liked it!:) and i will Im writing chapter 11 right now :)