My Book of Rhymes...

My Book of Rhymes...

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Quantum Q By AfterP_BeforeR Updated Jun 26, 2014

A collection of my poetry. The sonnets are from when I was young and fresh in the world still. And sappy. Thus they are utter shit tbh, but give it a read nonetheless...

PoetryBird PoetryBird Dec 16, 2014
I love the way you're able to bring the readers right into the battlefields and see the faces for ourselves. Beautifully tragic. Great piece, as always :-)
                              
                              p.s. I've missed you!
1010girl 1010girl Jul 28, 2012
This is amazing!! This is awesome! I am mind blown by this because you made me go into it thinking it would be terrible but it is so good!
whodunit whodunit Apr 19, 2012
wait you said this was utter shit?
                              
                              this should be read at like, memorial services. this should have been read at my uncles funeral (he was in the army). THIS. IS. beautiful. i don't even understand how you could have deprecating humor towards this. you're blowing my mind.
painismydrug painismydrug Nov 23, 2011
it's filled with so much sadness, but it's so powerfully written
Emiloo Emiloo Nov 14, 2011
Totally apt for poppy-day, me thinks.
                              And of course the score matches perfectly.
                              I know it's not, but I take it as a beautiful b'day present. Tanx.
                              <3
fauxpunker fauxpunker Nov 11, 2011
i'm not a poet and i know it ;-) i do really like the last 5 lines.