A collection of my poetry. The sonnets are from when I was young and fresh in the world still. And sappy. Thus they are utter shit tbh, but give it a read nonetheless...
I love the way you're able to bring the readers right into the battlefields and see the faces for ourselves. Beautifully tragic. Great piece, as always :-)
p.s. I've missed you!
This is amazing!! This is awesome! I am mind blown by this because you made me go into it thinking it would be terrible but it is so good!
wait you said this was utter shit?
this should be read at like, memorial services. this should have been read at my uncles funeral (he was in the army). THIS. IS. beautiful. i don't even understand how you could have deprecating humor towards this. you're blowing my mind.
it's filled with so much sadness, but it's so powerfully written
Totally apt for poppy-day, me thinks.
And of course the score matches perfectly.
I know it's not, but I take it as a beautiful b'day present. Tanx.
i'm not a poet and i know it ;-) i do really like the last 5 lines.