Naruto Mary Sues: A Fate Worse Than Tsukuyomi

Naruto Mary Sues: A Fate Worse Than Tsukuyomi

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MarySueKillers By MarySueKillers Updated Oct 08

Yes indeed YES INDEED! A Naruto fanfic has been chosen for our first critique. Naruto was the first anime we watched so it only seemed appropriate. We'll be scouring Wattpad for gut-wrenching Mary Sues to add to this book of atrocities. So prepare your eyes my friends. Stories of untold mediocrity await you.

-MarySueKillers

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People don’t make friends for entertainment. The whole purpose of friendship is to make genuine connections with others without any dishonest or dishonorable intentions. People are not toys to play with out of entertainment.
There is one thing I need to ask you about @MarySueKillers 
                              Have you ever taken into account that not everything will be explained in the beginning of the story? That's the only problem I have with your reviews. Somethings aren't explained in the profile, and are only revealed later in the story.
Klutzystar Klutzystar Sep 28
I never say this kind of things to anyone but-
                              "You're a freak! Go away. Nobody wants you here!!"
Whoever made H2O, its Team 7 you dummy. And....well please stop.
I should make my OCs chase after a piece of lint for a mission. It’ll be on Squad Anko, though.
What the hell Mizu
                              You are such a Mary Sue
                              What is a Moon Wolf.
                              -haiku by White Snake Sage