Kidnapped (UNREVISED)

Kidnapped (UNREVISED)

53.5K Reads 775 Votes 40 Part Story
Victoria By victoriacecile Updated Dec 01, 2014

A girl named Kat and her sister Klaire are kidnapped and taken to a new school and new world. Soon both girls find themselves trapped and see that they have many enemys and others who envy them, especially Kat. Kat and Daniel have a cute but passionate connection, But Kat finds herself attracted to Luke? But everything in her life seems almost written when she find's herself drawn to another stranger. Who will Kat chose? Who can she trust?

tammyxx tammyxx Aug 25, 2014
hey just wanted to help a bit this should be: I threw my phone on the bed and annoyed, walked out of my room. :) no hate xx
Jinx_Mage Jinx_Mage May 29, 2012
Capitalize the letter I. I love blah blah blah, there are some grammatical errors, I would suggest finding someone willing to edit your work for you. Interesting plot though. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
angeleyeshush angeleyeshush Dec 14, 2010
I knew it was something about vampires  :D
                              I just knew it, Lol . 
                              Pretty interesting. (:
angeleyeshush angeleyeshush Dec 14, 2010
This is pretty good! <33 
                              I love the feeling when you black out and you have no idea whats happening. (: 
Beccabee1993 Beccabee1993 Dec 09, 2010
i loved it lol, still the same things. only small mistakes. Maybe if u read it out loud before u post. you will catch them better. 
                              can't wait to read the rest. 
victoriacecile victoriacecile Dec 09, 2010
@Beccabee1993 alrighty I'll watch out for the mistakes and thanks ! (: