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Promise We Made at My Favorite Sandbox

Promise We Made at My Favorite Sandbox

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Tori By torifreakout Updated May 18, 2011

Raspberry is a seventeen year old girl who has isolated herself from any other boy because of a promise she made with her first crush (Seth), but when she meets a mysterious boy (Leo) at the park and claims to know her and kisses her, she slowly grows closer to him. How does she know Leo, and why can't she remember but he can? Will Seth ever come back for her, or will Leo sweep her off her feet?

Rainbow-Life Rainbow-Life May 17, 2011
naww thats soo cute if only guys were like that when they are older :)
evilangel15 evilangel15 Dec 07, 2010
This is really good, I think you should add a little more description so it doesnt sound rushed. Other then that keep updating!!! :)
                              ~Angel :)