Tracking Instinct

Tracking Instinct

311 Reads 9 Votes 2 Part Story
Sabrina the teen age witch By YouKnowMeLikeLife Updated Aug 14, 2012

Alexis was a typical teenager, that was until she crossed path's with Carl Burgundy, a werewolf with a pure rich bloodline and a rock hard heart. 
She’s thrown into a world of pain and sacrifice as Carl decides he only wants one thing. Her. With her past popping up at every corner, Alexis can only ask one question. Why me? But when it comes to it. Will she believe the answer?

  • baby
  • dad
  • death
  • dog
  • fire
  • lexie
  • mum
  • vampire
  • window
  • witch
  • wolf
  • women
  • yoga
Gentlepen Gentlepen Nov 15, 2011
Haha.. I really like this..good dailogues and well described scene.. It flowed nicely and easily understood... But i noticed a tiny mistake.. "take him, your not in danger". It should be "take him, you're not in danger"...
                              
                              Gøodjob overall..voted.
mattiwatti mattiwatti Nov 15, 2011
Postcard?! I like your description and feel this has a lot of potential (: Vote d