Every Breath You Take

Every Breath You Take

798 Reads 29 Votes 3 Part Story
Wouldn't you love to know. By EveryBreathYouTake Updated Nov 18, 2011

Did you ever fall for someone you know you shouldn't? Try hard to fight the feelings; but you couldn't? You fall deeper and deeper with each passing day, but try to hide it in every possible way. "It's because I love that I can't be selfish with you. I don't deserve you. But when it's real. You can't walk away."

  • breath
  • dont
  • every
  • know
  • random
  • school
  • snow
  • summer
  • take
  • vampire
  • vida
  • viva
  • what
  • write
Wolfmoongirl Wolfmoongirl Jan 29, 2012
Heartfelt, painful, and heartbreaking all at once. The description is deep and intense. Keep up the amazing writing!  ^_^
- - Dec 17, 2011
wow
                              really interesting beginning....you have me hooked :L 
                              voted :D
                              Sara xoxo
DesmolieuxKafil DesmolieuxKafil Dec 01, 2011
Woah. First few minutes on WattPad. First few sentences. This shall be my domain. Amazing!
ChristieCat ChristieCat Nov 14, 2011
XD Its blooming fantastic and beautiful XD The book cover - Fab (I can be at times crazy over book covers). The summary - great xD The chapter - Fantastic and interesting :3 The music - Fab again ;) Keep up the great work and please KMU xD <3
BlackRider19 BlackRider19 Nov 14, 2011
Beautiful... just beautiful! This is so amazing! I love it so much! <3
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Nov 14, 2011
This is so beautifully written ! You pieces of cheese are doing a fantastically fishy job :') <3 
                              
                              (Ignore the food talk. Hungry much?)