Dumb Fanfiction Moments

Dumb Fanfiction Moments

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zaynsmilk By zaynsmilk Completed

introducing dumb fanfiction moments, where i tell you all the moments in fanfics that are just .. dumb. 


// made in 2013 so if there's any spelling mistakes DONT point them out \\

EyeOfCiel EyeOfCiel Apr 13
I never really liked the word orbs instead of eyes because it seems a bit too much
I'm a bit confused. Because when you write a novel. Rather it is a fan fic or your own writing, you're suppose to be creative. Orbs is just another usage of the word; Eyes.
ArtiRox ArtiRox Feb 10
Mhm.
                              
                              "Wow, your orbs are so beautiful," gushed [insert boyband-member of the week's name here].
                              [insert stereotypical girls' name here] leaned back and stared at him. What the heck were orbs? "Are you okay?" she asked gently. "You might need a psychiatrist."
                              
                              xD
"HIS ORBS CAME AT MINE,LOOKING AS CUTE AS EVER." Bro it's looks like you just killed someone in a video game and took there Experience points and called them orbs. Also, use eyes. It makes it sound like you don't know what your saying and it makes Hannibal lector sound normal.
_Minjii_ _Minjii_ Jun 05
I only allow the word orbs when you're talking about a magical crystal ball or some shite. I don't like it when people call eyes orbs. Like Jesus lmao
Or say something like, "I let myself fall under the spell that his green irises cast upon me. They were soothing and made the world stand still." That sounds better than orbs... At least I think so anyway.