Forever With You {EDITING!}

Forever With You {EDITING!}

57.6K Reads 384 Votes 17 Part Story
Becca By whatsmyusername17 Completed

Also known as: Never Thought I Would End Up With A Mate! 

Laura is always moving around, she moves to a new place and she meets this boy named Luke who is very formilliar. Soon she reailizes that her dad has been lying to her and so has Luke. Can she really trust him even though shes in love with him? Laura and Luke face the challenge to trust and love. Everything seems to get in the way, and worst of all 'Wild Mutts' come to town and kidd nap Laura. Will she die or will Luke save her in time?

Love it!! best story i have read in a long time!!! - Bethany_18
Awesome so cute!! :) - Crazycharm
Wow that was awesomeness, i really really loved it!!!! - krittle23

WeresvsVamps WeresvsVamps Mar 20, 2012
How does she not knw tht is her mate frm th pull n tingles she feels toward Luke?  Didn't her father tell her how 2 find her mate?
whatsmyusername17 whatsmyusername17 Oct 23, 2011
@KunjParikh - thanks, and yes my spelling and such is pretty bad. I'm working on it though. Trying to get better at it! Thanks for reading. :)
xosmarties xosmarties Oct 23, 2011
it's a great story but the spelling/grammar errors can be a little distracting - especially when you really start getting into the story. Nevertheless, great descriptions and a cute storyline.
mmuir88 mmuir88 Apr 13, 2011
Sorry just thought I'd mention it. If You ever need someone to proof read don't hesitate to ask! :)
whatsmyusername17 whatsmyusername17 Apr 12, 2011
@MaisieLou - lol i did this part on my ipod. So yes lots of spelling mistakes! But my spelling is pretty bad. Ill admit! :P
mmuir88 mmuir88 Apr 12, 2011
i like the story so far but the spelling mistakes are killin me!! but that might be cause i peer tutor in english? hmm never mind me!