I'll just pretend.

I'll just pretend.

656 Reads 27 Votes 3 Part Story
Jo By iwantyouroreo Updated Nov 15, 2011

She lost all the people she loved all at once, leaving her lonely. Yet, when she finally gathers her pieces and tries to gain a new life, she realizes that people don't love her as easily as it always had been in her life. She faces hurt and emotional turmoil multiple times. Finally, she trudges through it all by simply pretending that they still loved her, people. But what happens when cold hard reality hits too deep and she can't pretend her way out of this any longer?

  • daniel
  • emotional
  • fear
  • hurt
  • love
ComicKitten ComicKitten May 07, 2012
I love this it's sad but heart warming at the same time and i don't know why!
sweet_nightmare92 sweet_nightmare92 Nov 27, 2011
This story had a good start though I feel sorry for her.. It's depressing.. But so far you've got great characters! XD
iwantyouroreo iwantyouroreo Nov 16, 2011
@Bluejay1997 and @yme123 Thanks so much!! And your comments have been noted, thanks for helping me with improvements. :)
yme123 yme123 Nov 15, 2011
This is great. I love your start and the candy analogy. You can really feel the hurt and confusion through this chapter and the shock lost of a broken family.
                              
                              Your story flows smoothly and your descriptions are great.
iwantyouroreo iwantyouroreo Nov 15, 2011
Ah! Thanks loads. Criticism  especially in chap 1 is so appreciated. I just dont know what wattpad readers r looking for. I appreciate ur feedback so much, n yes, I've read your story. :) Thumbs up btw. 
                              xxx
rain-kissed_midnight rain-kissed_midnight Nov 15, 2011
Well, that's what I think, anyway.. Hope this helped :) Moving on to Chapter two :)
                              
                              XOXO
                              ~Midnight.