Whos that Boy?[Discontinued]

Whos that Boy?[Discontinued]

910 Reads 14 Votes 6 Part Story
cOolcrAcker By cOolcrAcker Updated Mar 28, 2015

Brianna Lawson is living a teenage girls dream life,she is good looking and has the money.She is the queen bee of her school .The boys of Oakland High  drool at the sight of her but she is interested in knowing the secret of her shy project partner.

Jay parkinson is the shy boy of Oaklind high.With big spectacles and a soft spoken attitude he is the aim of all the bullies at school.But nobody knows that he is living a double life. He is also knows as Hunter Banks ,the  lead singer of a rising boy band and he doesnt intend for anyone to know his big secret.

These two people are totally different from each other.They get paired up together for a project.What will happen when brianna happens to see one of his concerts and notices the resemblance between her project partner and the hot singer in the band.Will Jay let Brianna know his big secret?

this is just the blurb... pls tell me if you liked the story ...ill continue writing if youg guys find it good enough:-)

  • beach
  • ben
  • boy
  • curious
  • girl
  • high
  • rich
  • rockstar
  • school
  • shy
skiesjpg skiesjpg Nov 24, 2011
Hmmm, I liked the plot, continue with the story, interesting and cute xD
cOolcrAcker cOolcrAcker Nov 14, 2011
@ItsDeeeee thanks a lot :-) ill keep that in mind while writinng
Melo-drama Melo-drama Nov 14, 2011
Continue the story, despite its flaws it has potential.
                              
                              I'll give you some tips.
                              Show, don't tell and don't the plot move to fast or slow. If it moves to fast there's no suspense and that's what really makes readers want to read on.
EmelianaZulazmi EmelianaZulazmi Nov 14, 2011
i like it alot.... i will like to read more of this story....