Love Comes Slowly

Love Comes Slowly

4.3K Reads 32 Votes 14 Part Story
Crystal By crywilli97 Updated Feb 17, 2013

Isabella Hyden had a pretty normal life. She had a ex boyfriend, and a soon to be boyfriend, but what happens when her ex wants her and only her and drives her away from everything she's ever known? Will her soon-to-be boyfriend, Jonathan, save the day, or sit back and watch? Or will Chris, her ex, win her back? Life changed the day he came back, now she can only hope for the best. As her friends help her find where she truly belongs, she discovers that Love Comes Softly.

  • action
  • alone
  • apartment
  • bay
  • calls
  • carpet
  • chris
  • color
  • comes
  • confusion
  • drama
  • feelings
  • fiction
  • food
  • friendships
  • heartbreak
  • hotel
  • house
  • hurt
  • isabella
  • jasmine
  • jonathan
  • lies
  • love
  • movies
  • paint
  • people
  • phone
  • regrets
  • retail
  • romance
  • scars
  • searching
  • secrets
  • shopping
  • silence
  • slowly
  • therapy
  • tracking
  • travel
  • truth
  • walls
  • wedding
  • window
SincerelySierra SincerelySierra Mar 06, 2012
I don't know if you necessarily need the very first line about him wanting her back. Besides that, I think it flows well. Good work, and keep updating! :)
crywilli97 crywilli97 Feb 20, 2012
@Rainyday1209 ok will definately fix that, thanks for pointing that out to me.
crywilli97 crywilli97 Feb 19, 2012
@ClaribelColon Thank you so much for voting and commenting. :):) It makes me happy everytime someone votes.:)
crywilli97 crywilli97 Nov 25, 2011
Thanks for Everyone and everything. Thanks for commenting and reading. :):):):):)
Evermoreblue Evermoreblue Nov 24, 2011
Its a good start but even though it was good, I thought that it was moving a lil to fast. Confused on why shes moving to New Mexico though but other than that its all good.
kidwiththesharpie kidwiththesharpie Nov 21, 2011
Okay I read it and I must say that (dramatic music playing in the background) it's a good start my only advice is to slow it do a little but I love how it's not the overly predictable story that seems to always end up this site :D