The Outsider

The Outsider

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Amelia Swan was the outsider in her family. Her step father hated her, her mother thought she was useless, and Bella was always the golden child. The only one who truly loved her and believed in her was her father. When Bella forces Amelia to move to Forks with her, Amelia doesn't complain. She gets to go home to her beloved father.
  
  As she goes through Forks she meets the Cullens. Amelia knows something is wrong with them and feels strange around them. Of course unlike Amelia, Bella is drawn to him, while Amelia prefers her old best friends from the reservation. How will things turn out for Amelia when her sister hates her?

  • bella
  • billy
  • carlisle
  • charlie
  • embry
  • jake
  • jared
  • jasper
  • leah
  • opposites
  • paul
  • quil
  • sam
  • seth
  • swansister
  • twilight
  • twin
Uh no, no,no,no,no,no,no,no,no. In the books the stepdad is a nice guy. You can't just put this new spin on it. I don't like that he sounds like he's a pedophile.
Just say this book is a rewrite of twilight with the people being twisted, warped versions.
Dude she oly has 3 people two share with try 9 siblings and a moma and dad  its hell
Bella's eyes are brown! BROWN! THIS BOOK DOESN'T GET IT RIGHT
Okay, you know what. I'm getting pissed off with this. In books that aren't in Bella's POV it normally has her be mean and rude in their mind. I hate that!!!!!!!!!!!
Gabster88 Gabster88 Aug 31, 2017
No need to be rude she's just pointing out that the look completely different no where in there did she say anything about being better than Bella