The Moon in my Heart

The Moon in my Heart

284 Reads 13 Votes 1 Part Story
Justin By JustinBlackburn Completed

Love, friendship, understanding things that never make since. That's how I feel the world is today, how about you. How do you feel about the world.

cuterimachan cuterimachan Jun 05, 2012
That was really sweet at the beginning :) I love the warmth of love :3
                              A few errors but they can be changed :)
JustinBlackburn JustinBlackburn Jan 18, 2012
@boogieinyourcloset thank you and its ok the longer the comment the better that way i know what to work on:):):):)
MaiMusicismylife MaiMusicismylife Jan 17, 2012
Good :) Only thing that I suggest is proofreading. Some parts you changed POV going from 'I' to 'They' and misspelling words. Other than that I liked it