Girl who's not what she seems.
That's how I would define this poem.
Inspired by: Circumstances
There are a lot of intense, passionate emotions in here. Very easy to relate with. Beautiful:)
I can so relate to this... :'( It's very prettily written and stocked full with raw emotion in an incredibly awesome way, and the ending is magnificent. Great poem altogether! Voted!
Well done! I'm no poet, so I won't even try to offer any type of a critique, as I would for a book. Now if it was a haiku, I could count syllables all day long!
Nicely written. wouldn't we all want to be freem from our own selves and our mistakes too. Good thought put into this poem. Good job :)
i feel this so much, it's absolutely beautiful. the soul-bones are breaking(: