Wait For Mated Love *Revising and Editing*

Wait For Mated Love *Revising and Editing*

1.1M Reads 6.6K Votes 27 Part Story
Shakira By shakira227 Completed

When I was seven I met him, The man that detoured my life from  the path that my parents had put me on and I let him. He promised me something that I thought I would only be able to have while I dreaming. A life that I wished for every day. He took me that very same day. I was put to work and I have not seen him since. I live for his promise, but maybe if I had known that I would be violated, bitten, and beaten daily until he comes for me again I would of staid home that day.

  • kidnap
  • love
  • romance
  • vampire
  • werewolf
WhiteSatinBlack WhiteSatinBlack Oct 29, 2013
Quite good so far, but you could definitely work on your grammar. I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, but overall, I really enjoyed it.
ValarieCotton ValarieCotton May 27, 2012
Short is ok but not much info is given at all. No real connection yet to the story.
Classically_Weird Classically_Weird Apr 11, 2012
awesome book so far keep i up! I'm only up to duh first chapter and i luv it :P
Lydia12S3 Lydia12S3 Feb 25, 2012
I love the idea of chance and terra together even though i havent quite decided if i like her or not. I love oliver and i love oliver and clarissa. I cant wait for more
CupCake_Cream CupCake_Cream Feb 13, 2012
this is really good its very captivating and really interesting. :)
jane83 jane83 Jan 19, 2012
Hi how r u im really enjoying your book damm clarissa lucky 2 men liking her wow how nice i like kai but oliver sounds mmmm lol well i hope u upload when you have time your doing a great job in the story how mwny chapters left i dont want it to end yet :-( well i have voted and faned you xx