THE PIT

THE PIT

408 Reads 69 Votes 9 Part Story
Jessamines By Jessamines Updated Jul 22, 2016

Following the devastating aftermath of the third world war, billionaire philanthropist Connor Freeman steps up to lead the new world; where everybody must follow the law or else be punished accordingly.
In a world where Freemans Law is gospel, a young woman struggles with her internal conflict - faith vs freedom.

Cover - georgetheghost
Thanks for the cover art, I love it :)

  • adventure
  • dystopian
  • female
  • first
  • friendship
  • hell
  • lead
  • love
  • religious
  • romance
  • school
  • strong
mysicol mysicol May 12, 2016
It's so good! It kinda reminds me of the maze runner because of the style it's written in.😄😄😄
DerekContyre DerekContyre May 12, 2016
... very Orwellian. 
                              I like the concept of a Distopian future controlled by a Stalinesque leader. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes and how Izra came to be where she was in the prologue. 
                              Your writing is good, keep it going.
RavensFlyAway RavensFlyAway Aug 26, 2016
Wow. Awesome first chap--I found it completely captivating (in a morbid curiosity sort of way 😁)
twoFace2016 twoFace2016 May 12, 2016
I'm liking this... I think I will be missing some writing time to read this...