Poetry Of Mine!

Poetry Of Mine!

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Jaylinee By PromPosser1 Updated Mar 10, 2012

My poetry that I'm sharing with you ;) I hope you like it.... I try to write it daily..

  • angel
  • candy
  • devil
  • doubledutch
  • flashbacks
  • fun
  • game
  • green
  • love
  • monster
  • play
  • rebel
  • relationships
  • remembering
  • rope
  • sugar
  • sweet
  • teach
Amazerful Amazerful Jan 07, 2012
I love the rhyming. When I first read it I thought it was an adorable poem but towards the ending, it was sad. I loved it though :)
                              The ending was just so sad..
Twinkeeloverr Twinkeeloverr Nov 14, 2011
I like it. Because it's sweetie! It's sad that he dies at the end :(
BlackxRose19 BlackxRose19 Nov 13, 2011
It's sad but cute at the same time and I like how you think at the strt nothing bad will happen. Great poem :)
AwesomeGirl405 AwesomeGirl405 Nov 13, 2011
Great poem, and just the fact that its somewhat sad like some poems should be is very good check out my stories Separated at birth or what life is like without you!
rune101 rune101 Nov 13, 2011
Aww, that was so sad... :'( It was happy as well because of the mutual feelings of love buy I get the feeling that it was found out too late. Great job, very expressive.
xxxKarinn xxxKarinn Nov 13, 2011
this was a nice idea for a poem! the rhyme scheme was good and basically...yeah, i liked the poem!! :-)