Cross My Heart Hope To Die

Cross My Heart Hope To Die

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Autumn Smith By Autumn_Fall Updated Jan 05, 2012

Adalinda layed on her bench, curled up in a pinck blanket. Her head drooped down and was almost touching the ground, her long black hair hanging like icicles. The few rainbow streamers did the same, glowing brightly by it's shine. Her pale skin looked warm and welcoming, lively even though she was asleep. I felt like holding her hand right then, but I wanted her to rest. Her eyes opened once in awhile, showing her weird but beautiful eyes. Her eyes had always been her most peculiar feature, that was the main reason why she didn't have any friends... besides me and her family. Her eyes are like a mood ring, they change depending on her mood. Her eyes right now were plain white, which is kinda creepy. But that's what she's feeling, sleepy or something. I dont know alot of what eye color is what mood, so I'm just guessing. The shirt she was wearing was a plain white t-shirt and her shorts were light blue. A couple of bird pins were on her purple sweater, and a circle pattern design. She reached in to touch her so warm looking hand, I needed it more now than ever. But than she lazily awoke, ugh I thought.

Autumn_Fall Autumn_Fall Jan 04, 2012
@besties10 Thank you. Flowerowl and I have woked very hard on this. 
                              
                              @XxGoldfishxX thanks =)
besties10 besties10 Jan 04, 2012
I LOVE IT! its really good! Makes me want to read more! Good job :)
Autumn_Fall Autumn_Fall Dec 30, 2011
@LeahElizabethJohnston. Thank you. We will work on it when we can. Thank you yet again
sweetsecrets sweetsecrets Dec 25, 2011
though there are some grammatical errors, overall, it's nice. :)
Autumn_Fall Autumn_Fall Dec 25, 2011
@Yeahbabyyeah Ok, we am trying to find a good editor. I have messaged the person so we are just waiting on a reply. We will go through it and see if we can fix some. Thank you
Autumn_Fall Autumn_Fall Dec 09, 2011
Isn't it though?!? Ok we will haveto do some editing. Thanks @FeatherMemories